Feedback for classmates

 Sarah- Vocal Accord

·         Major argument: Making publicity for this musical group

·         Strength: The drawings you created are really nice, I actually liked both of them and any of those will be great for the group

·         Develop: I’m not sure what will you be doing with logo, if posters or website, as mentioned the color will help a lot.

Charly- Group

·         Major argument: Support a local organization

·         Strength: The power point option is really good, you can tell you are really in this group and the idea of looking for new audiences is great.

·         Develop: as you mentioned the images are still missing, but I think when you add them to the presentation is going to be much better. Also as mentioned in some slides you have a lot of text.

James- Online Piracy

·         Major argument: Online piracy

·         Strength:  The data collected is great, helps to realize how big the problem with piracy is. Also the design is really good; the combination of colors and shapes helps the visual.

·         Develop:  just make your sources visible and when you’re done I think is going to be a very interesting work.

Cassandra- Greek life

·         Major argument: Arguments to join Greek life.

·         Strength:  Uses convincing arguments about Greek life in college. The media used is really good, something quite different and yet simple. I really liked it.

·         Develop: Maybe using background music (if possible) would help. In some parts the see-trough text was difficult to read with the background.  Maybe some images would help to invite more people to join.